Education Consulting & Essay Editing

Every application is a story worth telling well.

Bloom & Word works with MBA applicants to sharpen essays, resumes, and recommendation letters — turning scattered experience into a clear, honest narrative admissions committees remember.

Wharton MBA
English & Mandarin
US & international applicants
Admissions · resume · rec letters · essays

Two crafts, one aim: help you write your way in.

01

Admissions Consulting

End-to-end guidance through the application process — positioning, timeline, and strategy tailored to what each program is actually looking for, from an admissions-side perspective.

02

Resume Review

Reworking your resume so it reads clearly to an admissions committee, not just a recruiter — sharpening how experience is framed and what gets emphasized.

03

Recommendation Letters

Guidance for both applicants and recommenders on building letters that add real, specific weight to an application rather than repeating the resume.

04

Essay Review

Line-by-line editing and structural feedback — sharpening the idea underneath a draft rather than smoothing it into something generic. Includes personal statements and supplemental essays.

A good essay isn’t a performance. It’s the clearest version of something true, said plainly.
— The approach behind every draft we edit together

Who you’re working with

Wharton-trained, admissions side

Trained within Wharton’s own admissions office, with over ten years in the industry — informing how applications actually get evaluated, not just how they’re written.

A track record at the top

Students have been admitted to Harvard Business School, Stanford GSB, Wharton, Chicago Booth, Kellogg, and other leading MBA programs.

Bilingual, by necessity

Fluent in English and Mandarin, working closely with international families across the US, China, Hong Kong, Singapore, and beyond through every stage of the process.

Pricing

Essay Packages

Brainstorming, commenting, polishing, and strategy
3 schools (incl. resume & rec letters)$6,000
Each additional school$1,250

Polishing

Finalizing drafts and getting them submission-ready
Standard turnaround$0.50 / word
Due the day before deadline$0.75 / word
Draft work$350 / draft

Hourly Check-ins

For quick questions or a single working session
30 minutes$175
60 minutes$350

If a draft isn’t ready to be polished, you’ll hear why before any polishing work begins — you can then choose to have it worked on directly or revise it yourself first. Payment is due in full before work begins on each engagement.

Let’s talk about your application.

Every engagement starts with a short conversation about where you are, what you’re applying to, and what kind of help would actually move things forward.

Based in
Philadelphia, PA
Working with
US, China, Hong Kong & Singapore